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* what's with the long list of city names?! This is superfluous information | * what's with the long list of city names?! This is superfluous information | ||
* | * you need to analyse and critically examine the goals and outcomes of Okoprofit and what benefits it could potentially offer to the Czech Republic or whether it's even feasible to apply here; otherwise you've only provided a brief description of the organisation | ||
* explain what Agenda 21 is - most readers wouldn't know | |||
* is it really a conclusion? | |||
Overall assessment: Good | |||
Andrew | |||