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Make sure you cite your references in the text, and not just at the end of the article. | Make sure you cite your references in the text, and not just at the end of the article. | ||
Use an objective voice - don't refer to 'we' or 'us' or 'our Republic'. | Use an objective voice - don't refer to 'we' or 'us' or 'our Republic'. | ||
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Well done on completing your assignment. You've used and created references well, and even managed to upload an image, so you can call yourselves qualified users of wiki now ;) The English needs some correcting, but overall it's understandable. | |||
Your case study is missing several points, however: | |||
* there doesn't appear to be any application to the Czech context | |||
* the study reads like a marketing leaflet but with all details about how Okoprofit achieves its goals; some concrete examples would have helped to understand what exactly it is that Okoprofit does (a reader wouldn't know without following one of the links) | |||