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'''Caroline Reibe: "vote on quality"''' | |||
Hi Jana, hi Josef! | |||
Here comes my second "vote on quality". I liked reading the essay but I found a few minor criticisms. I think there should have been more references that support his argumentation or highlight some special aspects. | |||
When he writes about the Islamic population and the fear about it, I missed an explanation that is different from fear of "the unbeknown". I would probably had mentioned the attack on the US in 2001 that caused a big anxiety towards all arabic cultures. This goes along with general suspicion and prejustice against this cultural group. | |||
It would have been nice to hear arguments of both sides in a more structured way and then come later to a conclusion. | |||
But I really liked the paragraph on European History ("What is the European identity?") because it gives a good short overview about the European values and the historical steps that were taken to todays stage. | |||
To sum up, I'd like to say, that I found the theme really interesting and the essay good and easily to read. | |||
Best regards, | |||
Caro | |||
--[[User:Reibe|Reibe]] 18:35, 12 December 2010 (CET) |
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