29
edits
No edit summary |
No edit summary |
||
Line 70: | Line 70: | ||
First of all I am very sorry that I did not posted my comments earlier, I hope you still have enough time to read my comments and improve your text. | First of all I am very sorry that I did not posted my comments earlier, I hope you still have enough time to read my comments and improve your text. | ||
I really like your theme, I think it is very current topic in respect to the financial crisis and in regards to globalisation. Though I had some difficulties to understand every thing, you could express some parts more in detail, even if I know that it is a very wide filed and the seminar just offers a small access. | I really like your theme, I think it is a very current topic in respect to the financial crisis and in regards to globalisation. Though I had some difficulties to understand every thing, you could express some parts more in detail, even if I know that it is a very wide filed and the seminar just offers a small access. | ||
Starting with your first text, there you give a short and brief introduction of your theme. You describe the changes in financial markets linked to the upcoming connection of globalisation and capital markets. This Introduction gives a good overview. | Starting with your first text, there you give a short and brief introduction of your theme. You describe the changes in financial markets linked to the upcoming connection of globalisation and capital markets. This Introduction gives a good overview. |
edits