Students discussion:Shaping globalization: migration in times of globalization: Difference between revisions

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Hi Fabian, your text is readable and easy to follow. it is shown in an academic style. it is making a migration as if the issue is the most important one in the field study of globalization. I'm sure one of your motivation bringing up this issue is the make people aware of the existence of the issue of migration. Our topic has some intersections here and there. One structural note in the format of your text is that probably is better looking when the abstract part is moved to the first part of the text.
Hi Fabian, your text is readable and easy to follow. it is shown in an academic style. it is making a migration as if the issue is the most important one in the field study of globalization. I'm sure one of your motivation bringing up this issue is the make people aware of the existence of the issue of migration. Our topic has some intersections here and there. One structural note in the format of your text is that probably is better looking when the abstract part is moved to the first part of the text. I would also like to comment on your content.Since you mention in the abstract that diaspora has managed to transfer money or know-how to their original country. you could also touch on some percentage of immigrants who have educated in the developed country and settle as an immigrant as soon as they graduate.Do you still considered them a part of diaspora?


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