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* Coherence of the content with the title and thesis: You describe the facts of global media results very good, even though in a sometimes partial way. Maybe the divergent opinions could be stressed up better and be more underlined, so that the conclusion gains more emphasis. In the first sentence of your conclusion you made out that it is a matter of perception. Individually or homogenized taken perception? I think the link between the title and the content could be stronger tied. | * Coherence of the content with the title and thesis: You describe the facts of global media results very good, even though in a sometimes partial way. Maybe the divergent opinions could be stressed up better and could be more underlined, so that the conclusion gains more emphasis. In the first sentence of your conclusion you made out that it is a matter of perception. Individually or homogenized taken perception? I think the link between the title and the content could be stronger tied. | ||