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Paper title: | '''Paper title: Global-labor, Risk or Opportunity?''' | ||
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== 1. Basic criteria == | |||
1.1. Relevance of the subject to the general theme '''High''' | |||
1. | 1.2. Coherence of the content with the title and thesis '''High''' | ||
1. | 1.3. Quality of the content from the methodological point of view (see below) '''Medium''' | ||
1. | 1.4. Quality of the text from the formal point of view (see below) '''Medium''' | ||
== 2. Summary Comments for Author == | |||
2.1. Contribution to theory or practice High | 2.1. Contribution to theory or practice '''High''' | ||
2.2. Originality of the paper High | 2.2. Originality of the paper '''High''' | ||
2.3. Adequate references to prior and related works by other authors High | 2.3. Adequate references to prior and related works by other authors '''High''' | ||
2.4. Accurate information Yes | 2.4. Accurate information '''Yes''' | ||
2.5. Current information Yes | 2.5. Current information '''Yes''' | ||
2.6. Methodology Yes | 2.6. Methodology '''Yes''' | ||
2.7. Writing style is generally Readable | 2.7. Writing style is generally '''Readable''' | ||
2.7.1. Paper is logically organised Yes | 2.7.1. Paper is logically organised '''Yes''' | ||
2.7.2. Ideas are clearly presented Yes | 2.7.2. Ideas are clearly presented '''Yes''' | ||
2.8. Meets submission requirements (abstract, length, style, citation rules) Yes | 2.8. Meets submission requirements (abstract, length, style, citation rules) '''Yes''' | ||
== 3. Written Comments for Author == | |||
Hi Irmawan, at first: It was very interesting to read your text, because it was googreadable and easy to understand- good essay. There are only a few comments which I want say to your essay. In the formal point of view: I’m not sure if your citation style is correct. I thought we should also make information of the book page from where you have your articles. Also, you took the big theme of global labor very precise in your relative short essay. The good structure of your essay let me recognize a red thread. I think that your title is one hundred percent the content of your essay. Once again your resource list, it is good that you work with so many resources, but in your resource list, add the publishing house as well and end with a full stop. I like the style you write your essay, it is easy to read and you have a big content of vocabulary. | |||
Comments on the content of your essay | |||
Global labor is one of the biggest themes which you can write about in part of globalization. My theme: Shaping globalization: migration in times of globalization is part of your theme of global labor. You use a logical structure in your text which let the reader realize your essay and its key points very fast. I think you have shown very good the risk of global labor out of different point of views, a good idea to put yourself in the situation of these human beings. You gave us many examples for the risks. But in my point of view there are also many chances for the people on the global labor market. When you read my essay you will see. When you could find also 2 or 3 more opportunities for your essay? Because the global labor is also a big chance for developing countries. Your conclusion is also very good you summarize your essay shortly and you suggest a discussion with interesting statements. You give solution approaches which are very interesting and give the essay a very interesting end. | |||
Overall a god work which only need some little changes for being very good. | |||
== 4. General Recommendation for articles (highlight one option): == | |||
4.1. Publish as is | 4.1. Publish as is | ||
4.2. Acceptable with minor modifications | '''4.2. Acceptable with minor modifications''' | ||
4.3. Might be accepted after major modifications | 4.3. Might be accepted after major modifications | ||