Talk:The New Economic Market: Water: Difference between revisions

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--[[User:Marx|Marx]] 22:38, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
--[[User:Marx|Marx]] 22:38, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
Assessment from January 4th
Remarks:
Good text, focused and practical, relatively well structured with reasonable conclusions. I still have some remarks:
* if you are speaking about benefits of using the concept of “economic good” in relation to water, you should explain it little bit more. In economical theories, water is considered to be “Common-pool resource”, see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Common-pool_resource or “Common good” see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Common_good_(economics) – so the difference should be pointed out. It is important as pure “economic good” does not reflect all aspect of water use, especially its non-excludable character.
* potable water management could be based on economical principles, but distribution of water probably not – here public policy should have its crucial importance
* I do not understand the “Virtual water” paragraph – it is related to water management, not to the economic market of water (should be reflected in your title and abstract?)
* please move the paragraphs from the Student theme page to the introduction of your article and write a real abstract (more brief). You could use parts of it, of course.
--[[User:Jana Dlouha|Jana Dlouha]] 13:57, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
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