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=== Final assessment=== | |||
For the moment about 90 point as some formal requirements are still abandoned (see ''General Recommendation for articles'' and ''Comments on the almost final version of the text''. Good luck with finishing the text! | |||
== Peer review of the case study (by Caroline Reibe) == | == Peer review of the case study (by Caroline Reibe) == | ||
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--[[User:Admin|Jiří Dlouhý]] 09:26, 8 March 2011 (CET) | --[[User:Admin|Jiří Dlouhý]] 09:26, 8 March 2011 (CET) | ||
== Comments on the almost final version of the text == | |||
Hi Zuzana, | Hi Zuzana, | ||
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March, 3rd, 2011 | March, 3rd, 2011 | ||
== Literature review == | |||
Well done literature review: includes meta-reflection that could be used in further stqages of your research procedure. | |||
I suggest that you concentrate in next step on description of the phenomenon using information from your resources. Then, you could write in a foreword (or amend your already written foreword) that this problem has many reasons: specify them as psychological, behavioral, economical etc. In conclusion you could say something about its negative effects. | |||
You still need to decide what you consider to be the main lesson learned from your case study. Something that you could share with the rest of the world pointing out that specific conditions described (CR situation) provide some valuable experience for the others. Economic and other reasons are global, but concrete manifestations have to do something with our conditions. | |||
--[[User:Jana Dlouha|Jana Dlouha]] 18:48, 22 January 2011 (CET) | |||
== Gallery == | |||
Hi Zuzana, | |||
there is possibility in wiki of quite easy presentation of images - this is function <nowiki><galllery></nowiki> (you have to use "Edit" function for this comment page to see, how I did it): | |||
<gallery> | |||
Image:240px-AON WAKAMATSU SHOPPING CENTER.jpg |Shopping centre Wakamatsu. Fukuoka, Japan | |||
Image:240px-Galerie Butovice.jpg |Galerie Butovice, Prague, Czech Republic | |||
Image:240px-Praha-letnany.jpg | Shopping centre Letňany, Prague, Czech Republic | |||
Image:240px-Praha Chodov Centrum Chodov a okoli.jpg| Centrum Chodov, Prague, Czech Republic | |||
</gallery> | |||
But I do not want to change your article directly, as you maybe have different opinion how the pictures should be used. | |||
I had made some minor changes in references and in formating of your page.--[[User:Admin|Admin]] 06:09, 15 March 2011 (CET) | |||