Talk:National laws for global capital markets - A contradiction?
Your topic deserves the whole book and it is difficult to explain everything on a restricted space. So, you often start argumentation but do not explain the problem in depth - it is out of context then. Concentrate on smaller issues with clear conclusions.
Your article would deserve more extensive introduction describing problems and possibly benefits of global markets (you have deleted the previous intro?).
--Jana Dlouha 10:23, 8 December 2009 (UTC)