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Hello Irmawan, thanks for the review, it is a good one and Fabian could certainly find the viewpoint of the “other side” of the migration process – how do the immigrants perceive it. You could have made some comments on the formal features as well – the way the text is organized now is not very logical and the reader might miss the conclusion relevant to all of the aspects mentioned in the title of the article. But – well done! | |||
--[[User:Jana Dlouha|Jana Dlouha]] 09:37, 16 January 2010 (UTC) | |||
'''Paper title: Shaping globalization: migration in times of globalization''' | '''Paper title: Shaping globalization: migration in times of globalization''' | ||
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Reviewer´s assessment | ===Reviewer´s assessment - Irmawan Rahyadi=== | ||
== 1. Basic criteria == | == 1. Basic criteria == | ||
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4.4.3. Quality of presentation is poor | 4.4.3. Quality of presentation is poor | ||
== Assessment from January 4th == | Rahyadi 00:36, 12 January 2010 | ||
== Assessment from January 4th - Jana Dlouhá== | |||
Remarks: | Remarks: | ||