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Hi Martin, Petr & Aggie
Hi Martin, Petr & Aggie


Sorry I didn't comment earlier on your first assignment - the diary entry - I corrected the English and then moved onto the next group without making any observations in the discussion page. You made a reasonable summary of the day's events and added some nice images of the places we visited. A short description of and link to
Sorry I didn't comment earlier on your first assignment - the diary entry - I corrected the English and then moved onto the next group without making any observations in the discussion page. You made a reasonable summary of the day's events and added some nice images of the places we visited. A short description of and link to the 'White Carpathian Tradition' would have been good, and perhaps what methods were used to involve the local community in building the Vulkanland 'brand'. Finally, I don't quite follow your criticism of photovoltaic energy and its impact on the Third World; further explanation and at least one or two references would be very helpful!! :)

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Hi Martin, Petr & Aggie

Sorry I didn't comment earlier on your first assignment - the diary entry - I corrected the English and then moved onto the next group without making any observations in the discussion page. You made a reasonable summary of the day's events and added some nice images of the places we visited. A short description of and link to the 'White Carpathian Tradition' would have been good, and perhaps what methods were used to involve the local community in building the Vulkanland 'brand'. Finally, I don't quite follow your criticism of photovoltaic energy and its impact on the Third World; further explanation and at least one or two references would be very helpful!! :)