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Firstly, I created a table of references for you :) | Firstly, I created a table of references for you :) Your English is excellent and I didn't need to make many corrections. You've written extensively and in detail about Kaindorf, which is fantastic as there was information there that I couldn't remember hearing. And of course you have it all very well referenced, which is an important skill to development for future academic writing. | ||
You've taken a broad view of the comparison with the Czech Republic by looking also at relevant legislation, which is also very good, but as you say, the outcome was disappointing in terms of finding a comparable region to Kaindorf. You've done a truly excellent job and I hope it's inspired you to action in the future! :) | |||
Best of luck | |||
Andrew | |||