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 --[[User:Jana Dlouha|Jana Dlouha]] 13:19, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
+== Caroline Reibe: "vote on the quality" ==
+Hello Jana, hello Svea,
+as a part of the specific assignment of the first weeks of module 2 of ISPoS I like to vote on the quality of Sveas last years essay. It was very interesting to read through the last year texts to get a good first impression on how to write such an essay.
+First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed reading the essay because the theme was interesting and it was well written. The vacabulary was very diversified. I really liked the different examples that you used to support either the positive or the negative aspects of globalisation. It was nice to have a short introduction during which the most important keyword were explained by definitions. You did a good research-work and I had always the feeling that your statements are based on fact and therefore reliable.
+The overall structure was good to follow but I would have preferred a clear differentiation between the pros and cons of globalisation in individual paragraphs. And after that part a conclusion paragraph would have been nice where you come to the conclusion which side you really prefer.
+Best regards and thanks for your good work,
+Caro
+--[[User:Reibe|Reibe]] 17:57, 9 December 2010 (CET)