Talk:Security – global safety or collective danger?: Difference between revisions
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Revision as of 14:15, 8 December 2009
The text is almost perfect, only small remarks. As it is, the reader has a problem to orientate himslef, to see what you want to say - you have to include some paragraphs and structure it more logically (globalization conditions - resulting security risks - role of states and international organizations - possible solutions on the state and international levels etc.). Also your citations in the text should fit with the list of references.
Your points are clear and cover interesting (not banal) aspects. Try to document some of them.
--Jana Dlouha 12:15, 8 December 2009 (UTC)