Talk:The mining industry

--Jana Dlouha 05:29, 27 January 2012 (CET)

Comments before finalizing:

n general, it is well written, and the overall structure and logic is quite perfect. You raise many important points, and have an extensive list of resources. Small weakness is that you do not cite them in the text, it is quite needed, as everybody should know where are the data from.

One paragraph is not consistent (you should either leave the CSR out or rather somehow introduce the concept and its usage). But the text is focused and conclusion (SD perspective) quite strong! Of course, it's a pitty we do not see how the system is working in reality, e.g. how efficient is control and measures taken in case environmentall standards are not met.

--Jana Dlouha 13:47, 12 January 2012 (CET)